Sight of a girl who knows

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    Sight of a girl who knows

    I saw her before she saw me. Thrill at first sight.

    That slight slouch of shoulders told me she was taller than I saw. her shirt more tight than comfortable clinging to.......... heat...... smile... blush at the thought that completes the line. I wanted her to discover me the same way; with poetry but my thoughts are jumbled at the sight of a girl who knows,

     

     She glows like a Goddess....

     hair red with fire

    eyes burnt golden brown

    waiting to stop my heart.

    Oh Goddess, am I in trouble!

    maybe, she whispers, maybe you'll like it.

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    skymist2 commented on Sight of a girl who knows

    01-08-2011

    Excellent poem. Nice flow of thoughts, not broken or choppy. Good writing. I like it.Thanks for sharing this. Sky

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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