Simt/Feel

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  • Confusion

    Simt/Feel


    Simt...

    Nu stiu ce simt,
    Nu stiu ce vreau...
    E-o lume plina de cosmar
    in care timpul sta in loc,
    Iar eu ma lupt,dar...in zadar.

    In jurul meu e numai moarte,
    Sunt numai suflete zdrobite,
    Sunt lacrimi de singuratate
    Ce vor sa fie auzte!

    Si ma intreb mereu "ce vreau?"
    Si ma intreb apoi "ce simt?"
    Si am raspunsul dar nu-l vreau...
    Prefer mai mult ca sa ma mint.

    MAi rad,mai plang si mai iubesc
    Ma mint mereu cu aceleasi lucruri...
    Si apoi incep ca sa traiesc
    Mintindu-ma ca sa ma bucur.

    Si va ramane un cosmar
    Cu suflete neauzite...
    Voi incerca sa-l fac frumos
    Mntindu-ma ca poate o sa merite


    Feel

    I don't know what I feel...
    I don't Know what I want...
    It's a world full of nightmears
    Were time is frozen
    And i fight...with out hope.

    Around me everithing is death
    There are only crying souls,
    the tears are for the lonleynes
    And they just want to be heard.

    I always ask my self "what I want"?
    And ask my self "what I feel"?
    I got the answer but I don't want him...
    But I choose to lie my self.

    I laught,I cry and I"m in love
    I lie my self with the same things,
    And then I try to live again
    Lieing again to be happy.

    This will remain a nightmare
    With souls that are not heard...
    I will try to make him beautiful
    Lieing my self that it would be worth.

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    stever commented on Simt/Feel

    11-28-2009

    this is good stuff ,dont let the critics tell YOU how to write its all you ..10

    mykhail commented on Simt/Feel

    01-30-2009

    I liked the poem but the English had me at "hault" a few times. Keep it up! Mykhail

    ccslim commented on Simt/Feel

    01-28-2009

    Very good for the English written part. Do watch for High and low soundings. To add my heart senses that it flows to better movements inside the first Simt.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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