bforibus commented on Sins Of My Parents

06-14-2009

i love the insight of this poem and the emotion put into it. it made it diffucult to read because of the small words but it added to the picture's colors. the doubt of ones self worth indeed needed the small text great job.

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shylove commented on Sins Of My Parents

05-28-2009

This poem is awsome!!! I like the dark feal...Its depressing....Its hard to come from a sin and be brought up with a struggle of exceptance.... I understand the pain of teenage pregnancies...Im not a case but I have many friends who are pregnant or have mothers and fathers not much older than them. Their parents regret having them at such an early age and there for have to deal with the dark sides of their child because they can only look at their own pain not thinking about how much pain the ch

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poetinot62 commented on Sins Of My Parents

05-27-2009

teen pregnancy is a very serious problem in this country. no teen is ready for what is about to happen when they have a child. there life changes forever. you cant take it back. very good poem thanks for sharing

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