someone

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    Ho god could it be is there someone out there jest for me ,
    someone to call my own, someone to call on the phone,
    someone to tell me it all right, someone to make love to me all night,
    someone to call my man, someone to put a ring on my hand,
    time go's on
    someone is late again, i jest don't understand 7 year ago he put this ring on my hand, on call on the phone he left me all alone,
    now all we do is Fiat all night,things jest don't fill right,
    i thank to my self i wont to be free, but looking at him i no that's all on me.do i stay or do i go, i said to my self fuck that and run out the door

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    ccslim commented on someone

    02-12-2009

    Can someone hear me lol! Good story line and meter. Suggest grammer cleanup and and hehe never RUN away!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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