Something Great!

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  • JoJoChick
  • Life is truely what you make of it. So, make it good!!!! :)

Something Great!

Is love suppose to feel so... so... normal?
I mean, I fell like I can sky rocket with this person.
With them holding me.
With their arms around me.
I'm flying like... like there is so much space to be free in.
Like a bird with no worries. So simple.
So... so... so undifficult.
Like I know what I'm doing, when I have no idea.
It's like there is no end... to a feeling that feels so great.
To great to let loose, to let run.
I feel... Feel like I'm walking on clouds.
Clouds that can hold the weight of a human body.
Clouds that seem to know what they are doing.
What they are doing in your life.
What they are doing in anyone's life.
It's a confusing journey, but it feels so great. To great.
A "great" you wanna stick with and hold on to, and never let go.
And when you do let go you feel... feel so useless.
So you grab on again. You feel great again.
You dont let go. You never want to.
So you keep a hold of it.
And keep a hold of the person who brought it to you.
Knowing it is possible to let go, you look at the bad ending and laugh.
Laugh at it saying:
Who would want to let someing this great go?
So great you feel like your flying?
Nothing can be greater than this.
So dont ever let go. Ever!!

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princeandrew commented on Something Great!

11-10-2009

Nice piece, for a moment i'm learning that finding love is the greatest thing that can ever happen to someone and the worst is loosing that same person...sometimes love's not worth holding unto...

JoJoChick

12/23/2009

Love is always something to hold onto. I have never found any kind of love an unusable love(if you know what I mean). I love my friends, family, boyfriend, and everything that makes us feel that way. Yes, people can loose someone's love but I see it as opening a new door to a relationship that might come up in the future. :) you have your opinion though. i like that you expressed it to me. thank you. hope to get a reply. :) ~staciejo~

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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