study's....

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study's....

what would you do if the one you loved didn't love you too?
if they are all you think about and there's nothing you wouldn't do for them.... when you sit and study his walk... just so you could mimick him...
when they KNOW that there is nothing else in the world that you want more than to have him in your arms...
when the mear thought of hurting them enters your head, it's enough to break your heart...
when he kisses you, you feel as if the whole world floated away...
that nothing could hurt you...?
that nothing could ever bring you back to life but him...?
that nothing could ever break your heart more than him...?
that nothing would be able to keep you from him....?
............. what would you do if he was your world........?

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gregster commented on study's....

12-02-2010

very nice poem but thing is read simple love on my list if he aint saying that or close to that well what will u do than

Maxsbabyforever

12/02/2010

i will.

Rhymer commented on study's....

12-01-2010

A love that endures and fills all of our expectations and desires. Is there such a love? 10 from me.

Maxsbabyforever

12/02/2010

i haven't experienced it... but i know it's somewhere....

smoothdame commented on study's....

12-01-2010

I would hold on very tight because a love like that is up for grabs because everything is looking for that type of devotion. good job you made me think. Check out my poem "All of me" you will like it.

Maxsbabyforever

12/01/2010

I have. it's amazing.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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