'Take My Hand'

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'Take My Hand'


Take my hand as i lead you to this fire,


The fire of our love and fobidden desire.


Do you trust me to lead you?


If you do, we will do as others do.


I say this because of your smile,


And if we do this right, we will be here for quite a while.


I hope this memory lasts a lifetime and it will on my command,


So just lay back, shut your eyes, trust me, and take my hand.

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omari commented on 'Take My Hand'

01-22-2010

I enjoyed your poem...it illicited a subte but strong embrace. The essence of your phrasing is compelling...look forward reading others!!!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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