Take off

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    Take off

    As I open the door,
    The smiles in your face
    Makes me throw my bag to the floor
    As you move straight to take off my lace.

    As I sit to rest,
    You overcome my tiredness
    By playing your hands closer to my chest
    You take off my heart from its sinfulness

    As you unbuckle my tie
    I hurriedly take off the first button
    Your innocent face does not make me shy
    With respect and lust, you take off your Acton

    As I desirable bring mine
    You share with me by bringing yours
    Love, faith and hope can be continued in our love line
    And out of generosity, we make ours.

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    CHURV commented on Take off

    01-23-2009

    please do not feel disapionted but i had a hard time following this poem ,is this about sex,lust or love?i got confused

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