Thankyou Emily Dickinson.

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    Thankyou Emily Dickinson.

    he spoke as if he knew me well-
    though he did not at all.
    he didn't know my breathe had stopped
    to catch me from my fall

    he charmed his way through many things
    my heart was all but one
    he whistled to the beat of love
    and laughed at what he'd sung

    then came the day the winds blew gray
    the shattered glass had done
    all it could do to shred my heart
    so it beat for no one

    the space that grew between us said
    that it would never leave
    it only ate what could be hurt
    what could be hurt was me

    the house was left a tangled mess
    and so i to say the least
    the vines grew thick from my breast
    and helped entangle me

    i no longer breathed as did before
    for he had sealed my lungs
    and though he stole a piece of me
    the end had already begun

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    NevillePark commented on Thankyou Emily Dickinson.

    06-08-2009

    Delightfully attended cadence and rhyme. And you're only at the beginning of a ... writing "career?" I would hone some of the sentence structure though. e.g.= the house was left a tangled mess and so i to say the least the vines grew thick from my breast and helped entangle me. ... so i to say the least can't communicate the thought and it can only offer a bump in the path of direct understanding. Very nice though.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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