That Boy In The Showers

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  • Pain
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  • Loss
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  • Sadness
    • Tadanori
    • has darkness in his eyes but there is slowly light beginning to shine in his heart

    That Boy In The Showers

     The lone boy huddles on the floor of the shower
    If they saw him would they laugh and point?
    Would they cry or would some of them just wonder why?
    His knees drawn up to his chest, the girl presses her face against them
    Longing to be the boy she never was
    The boy huddled on the shower floor can't cry,
    but if he tips his face just right the water can be his tears
    Will he be taken into warm arms?
    Or will they just walk on by?
    The lone boy that huddles in the shower.

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    Rhymer commented on That Boy In The Showers

    11-23-2009

    Interesting read. I liked the write and the imagination required to create.
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    crazzyy4u commented on That Boy In The Showers

    11-23-2009

    wow i like it i could some what relate too it kinda but good job
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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