The Broken Smile

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Not every smile in this world can be save and retain for eternity, so remember it and live in the memories of the beautiful smile :)

The Broken Smile

Your
face
is no longer
smiling no matter
how I make a fool of myself
you are just looking at me
with your cold and icy eyes

Driven into a corner and searching for a solution
Wishing a miracle will happen
I will do anything to
regain that precious smile
on your beautiful
face

How
I wish a day
you will stand up and embrace me
with your arms
Everything went back as
it is the past
I miss your smile

But life gives no mercy
Things around you start
fading away from your sight
Darkness snatch you away
your smile
your everything
from the me
who can’t even save your smile
at the very last
moment

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Embraced commented on The Broken Smile

09-14-2010

Darkness snatched you away.........I can relate. Wonderful piece. =) E~

wiskeygirl5090 commented on The Broken Smile

09-07-2010

that is a beautifull poem i just absolutly loved the read.................

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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