The Door

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    The Door

    They take my friend into a room.
    He says oh, fine, love the perfume.
    We hear her scream in that room for we are next
    to be rapped then doomed.
    I go in and I try to fight.
    The man holds me down with all his might.
    I cannot scream, I cannot fight.
    I think of something else that might.
    I cannot move I am restained.
    He is done Ive had my pain.
    He takes a gun up to my head.
    Bam,
    Now I am dead.
    I cannot feel any pain any more.
    He goes out and shuts the door.

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    mrobb6488 commented on The Door

    05-18-2009

    I love the fact that you utilize nice form but the rhyming seems to be quite forced. I don't really want to say beautiful due to the subject matter but very well thought out and this is honestly a great piece. M-Robb

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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