The looking glass

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iv been told a few times that this poem didnt come from me.it sounds too much like edward allen poe,well its just me.if anyone out there chalenges my clame that i wrot this,prove it. i do apoligise for the harsh words but it gets frustrating to write something from inside  you and get chalanged on weather its realy mine.

The looking glass

here i sit in all my wonder.                            inside i rage like rolling thunder.                       is there escape from this darken plight.             dare i see just a spec of light                      ney they say so on i go                                  pacing here and there and to and fro.                i take one step and then one back.                  i take anouther hear crack.                              will i fall down into this hole                            tis where i hear the thunder roll.                       lord please save me from this sound                  as the visions go round and round                     the only one you are the mass                          that can save me from the looking glass.

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nonners commented on The looking glass

09-18-2010

i got it and thought it was brilliant, seems as if i ebb ever closer to that looking glass. well done.....bravo

hdmac commented on The looking glass

06-20-2009

Interesting poem. It sounds original to me. The kind of style you use is interesting, as the words seem to swirl around like that.

Rich123

06/20/2009

finaly someone who understands

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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