the pain you caused

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    its ironic pain can seem bad but in all actuality its there for a reason

    the pain you caused

     the stars aline
    cant tell time
    my sense has gone
    this is the pain
    you have caused
    my body
    it aches
    the world
    around me
    its quakes
    the light is dim
    i can no longer
    live life seems brim
    the pain youve caused
    that is all
    the pain youve caused
    i will now fall
    thank you for the pain youve caused
    thank you

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    darrelle17’s Poems (8)

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