The Priceless thoughts of mine

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The Priceless thoughts of mine

 The wind blows,
 and the clouds are drifted by the sweet thoughts of smiles
 As the moon calls for a subtitute
 Its rays emerges from my soul 
The moon looms over me
Heavenly music echoes in my ears
Thick fog enshrouds a majestic roof
The caravan of my dreams accelerate my vision
The night sky produces rays of inspiring thoughts in my mind
Pausing,my heart melts 
And triggers my hand to invite a pen for conversation
A paper is placed,and my thoughts showers pages,pages and pages
with limitless thoughts.
Here I write,there I compose 
The priceless thoughts of mine.

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Tempy commented on The Priceless thoughts of mine

09-02-2009

Heavenly music echoes in my ears paws for thought your minds in a good place write up the nicest storm let it rain and soak in. i'm impressed and inspired. nice write.

ojets2001

09/02/2009

Thank you much.

Tempy

09/02/2009

definite 10 from me i'd have given it 12 if i could i liked it let those beautiful words unwind and enfold them selves into more nice lines take care.

quickwrite commented on The Priceless thoughts of mine

09-02-2009

Wonderful, this is certainly one of the more original works I've read. Good work man.

ojets2001

09/02/2009

Thanks so much.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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