The Rage Within

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    The Rage Within

    Emotions run rampant, seething and writhing beneath the surface. With every beat my heart pumps the thick red darkness through my veins, screaming to be let out, it courses through me, pushing me, driving my madness till all that's left of me is withered and torn. The darkness creeps in, infectious and corrosive, eating away at my very soul. It is pain and hate and anger, sorrow and loss, trying to punch through the steel walls within, breathing in the smoke and fire of my self-condemnation. The sheer wretchedness that is in me, but no one sees, begging and pleading to be set free.

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    dangedmanjr commented on The Rage Within

    03-15-2009

    wow...great imagery!

    acjtb commented on The Rage Within

    03-11-2009

    this is definitely your best...raw...love it

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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