The room with so many mirror's

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They say we are our worst critic.I wrote this about ten years ago during a very low point in my life and to be frank it is the only one I have ever wrote and it took me about half an hour.In a nutshell this poem is about anyone of us when the chips are down and we cross that threshold into the room full of mirrors and we have a million images of ourself telling us how screwed up we are

The room with so many mirror's

From the moment I cross the threshold
I am surrounded
Hundred's upon hundred's of them maybe more
I can feel their eyes upon me like ice as they pass judgement by way of silent treatment
Who are they to speak of black kettles when they look and act as I do
They know nothing of my pain they know all my pain
As a group they are a formidable opponent but alone I shall conquer them one at a time
But until that day arrives I will avoid the room with so many mirrors

 By Patguapo the broken down phantom

 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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