The shade of shadows

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    The shade of shadows

    My patience has seized to exist
    pretend you're mine, you cant resist.
    Lost forever beneath your wall,
    Blades of grass will make you fall.
    I speak the truth,
    Except for the lie.
    I hope you're there,
    Dont make me die.
    The shade of the tree
    Reflects my view,
    Searching for me
    Will only harm you.

    The shade you see,
    is no reflection of me.
    Truth in the shade,
    Despite the grassy blades.
    Search and find,
    Heart over mind,
    Vision is lost,
    Iam so blind.
    Lost under the wall,
    Whose shade is ever so small,
    Lack of support
    The wall starts to fall.

    My plan gone to hell,
    The key doesnt unlock my cell.
    Escape this shade
    The shadow i made.
    I break down the wall,
    And back to hell i fall

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    Jonietta commented on The shade of shadows

    08-16-2009

    "Escape this shade The shadow i made" This is my favorite line...possibly because I live in the shadows myself..I like your style, but I am usually not a rhyming poem lover...but I like your style...

    WordSlinger commented on The shade of shadows

    03-09-2009

    My FAv part, I speak the truth, Except for the lie.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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