The Surfer

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Just a little poem about surfing a tube

The Surfer

Sitting in the lineup, I look to my left'
There's a wave comin so Im going to ride the crest'
Paddle palddle. the wave starts to break'
I stand up quick it feels like an earthquake
Water all around me as I feel the tube
Crashing above me head I feel the room
Of green water Im enclosed in so cool
Im looking out and feel entombed
I break from the tube and hit the lip
Spraying my friend whos got a grip
On his board as he ducks under'
The wave Ive just surfed
And I paddle back out for another

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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