The truth

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People may let u down, but God is forever faithful!!

The truth

There are so many broken hearted people
Looking for answers- Asking- why?
But my advice to them all is-
Keep looking to the MOST HIGH!!
He sees your pain and knows your heart;
He knows all that you've been through;
So, don't think for one moment he doesn't cares-
God has not forgotten about you.
People fail you,
But God never fails!!
And He'll give you the strength
You need to prevail.
Forgive, even though it's hard to forget;
Keep your head up and be strong.
The pain is sometimes unbearable,
But your heavenly father can bare it alone.
He sent you and I a saviour-
Someone to forgive all your sins;
So, forgive those who have hurt you
As you yourself are forgiven.
Pick up the pieces to your broken spirit,
And hand them over to God.
Don't try to fix things yourself;
You'll do a terrible job!
Let Go and Let God-
Have his way in your life,
And you will be rewarded greatly
For the Lord's rewards are more than nice.
He'll restore what was damaged and lost;
He'll make you whole again;
Just have faith. God won't let you down-
He's a true counselor and the greatest friend!!
BE BLESSED!!

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bodypate commented on The truth

09-08-2009

Though poem has an irregular rhyme partten, think it is good. Poet didn't make use litrary devices.

tamanjamom

09/08/2009

Thanks for the compliment and u r right about that!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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