the world we live in

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    the world we live in

    the world we live in will strip you of morality
    will break you down tear you apart and steal your vitality
    no loyalty no respect no honor no trust
    and just dont give a fuck that's today's mentality
    our society stays medicated with anything and everything to deal with reality
    some would rather live in fiction
    with self affliction which turns into an addiction

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    Venganza commented on the world we live in

    05-29-2009

    That's nice, i love the rhythm. You're outlook is pessimistic, but in no ways untrue. Keep up the good work.
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    BlackLabel commented on the world we live in

    03-27-2009

    Very true man, I share some of the same views
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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