These Eyes of Mine

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    These Eyes of Mine

    These eyes of mine are a crystal green
    When looking into them
    You'll see what I mean
    At times you can probably see right through them
    I have too when I've looked in the mirror
    Who can see it more clearer?
    I put my shades on so that feeling will be gone
    You can't see me now
    It's said they are the windo to the soul
    Oh wait there's just one big hole
    Nothing to see
    So just let me be
    My eyes are closed
    But I can still see
    That feeling I mentioned lies beneath
    Give me a minute so I can breathe
    They've seen plenty of tears
    And in the end will show no fear
    Do you get?
    Or do you choose to forget?
    Let me think
    Or should I just see a shrink?
    Ya, their still hollow
    And I choose not to follow
    These eyes of mine are my own
    Yours, your eyes
    What are they like?
    Can I look into them?
    Just let me take one look and see
    So I can finally let you be

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    StandingBear commented on These Eyes of Mine

    08-05-2009

    A well written work relating thoughts, relating our eyes. Great write.

    JaLaw commented on These Eyes of Mine

    03-06-2009

    Wonderful poem! Nice Eyes. Cheers!

    gabbzz commented on These Eyes of Mine

    02-11-2009

    nice poem. ~!*GABBzz*!~

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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