To love you

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    To love you
    To love you is to hate all,
    To bow down and take the fall,
    To get back up and try again,
    I shall not let my faith cave in,
    For if I do, I have lost all my hopes and dreams,
    I can not live without these things,
    I cannot fly and spreed my wings,
    For faith is all I got
    Do you love me or do you not.

    Written by:
    'Little Jazz'
    Jasmin J. Simon

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    BrielleC commented on To love you

    02-27-2009

    Great piece very strong message.
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    joker88 commented on To love you

    02-27-2009

    Nice flow with a great imagery. A sense of direction for what you want for yourself, well done.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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