:: Together ::

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By: Lyllie LapDance -- pen names I'm flowing and constantly changing Date: 8-19-08

:: Together ::

All the strands of time

run together

 

all the stars in the universe

shine together

 

all the chi in the world

flows together

 

all the clouds in the sky

float together

 

all the plants in the dirt

grow together

 

all the fish in the sea

swim together

 

all the circuits in the computer

work together

 

and us....

we just....

go together.

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Photographer77 commented on :: Together ::

06-28-2012

I love your poem, its just really clear and when I read it, I had a smile :)

windsongs commented on :: Together ::

06-27-2012

like the current-lol-chi-lifeforce , energy, inside well being-u got it! nice write!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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