Torrential

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Sometimes the only way to defeat your enemy is to deny it battle.

Torrential

Future events seem fleeting as the hours tick on by,
just 8 to go, I just don't know how I'm going to stay dry,
enveloped, swallowed, overshadowed never do I see,
a way for me to to breach the deadly torrent of this sea.

I work and slave for hours long until I can't see death,
there's nothing left for me right now except to hold my breath.

I cannot see the shore, but there it always lies,
sometimes you have to drown your self to open up your eyes.

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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