truly

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truly

 

    in my dreams i walk the earth,

    voices everywhere shouting and screaming,

    one voice speaks to me,

    i hear your heart pounding, a rhythm i cannot resist,

    a melody that makes me weak,

    i know that your heart beats for me, as does mine for you

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summerrose35 commented on truly

12-07-2009

Deep and moving with just a few words, you had no need for more!Well written,honesty.. I like that. SR

Rygar commented on truly

12-07-2009

short and sweet, simple yet elegant. very nice write and a joy to read. good job :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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