trust me

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    i want to be the one that you love
    i want to be the one that you can trust
    to be in your heart
    when love hurt's the most
    i want to be the one that,
    you call to talk to
    when you need someone ot believe in you
    here i am
    when you feel like crying you know that,
    you can talk to me
    i am here for you when you need me
    Maria Juanita Bonet

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    Thoucari commented on trust me

    05-26-2009

    I like it, but i believe you can write it a whole lot better. There are loads of grammer errors. But otherwise good.
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    maria01031

    08/16/2009

    thank you it happend's because i try to write and hold the baby all the time but thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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