TWO BAD NIGHTS

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It pays to be kind and mean
It works better when you let love go
It is best if you scream at broken hearts
Little is what i mean
Read it in the opposite.
June,6th,2009

TWO BAD NIGHTS

Sadly I write
towards the heart i just lost
it's my fault
it's your fault
whoever did it wrong  makes no sense
We were suppose to be together
We were suppose to make it count
I was lost i agree
you looked for but i won't come back
now,i face this dark street alone
with just my pen and paper.


First,the night is suppose to be yours not mine
am i right or wrong?
Second,the night is meant to be ours
am i right or wrong?
I made a mess with my mood
I made a mess with my silence
Lost in thoughts of another
How sad my lonely days as just begun
you caught red-handed
when you look inside i was not there
While i  was thinking of  undying love
I was loosing my cherry heart
when you made me see what i see now
I saw I had lost a longing love...tell me,is it wrong?To be beautyful?
is it a crime to let your weakness show?Or naturally beautys are meant to be strong and unbreakable?

Am bad, right?
I spoilt two nights for you
I gave you two bad nights!
am just sorry

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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