Under the Blade
under the blade
decisions are made
lives are taken
deaths mistaken
the love for pain
a love so sick
what happened then
the final trick
Under the Blade
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gallaxy commented on Under the Blade
08-10-2010
- As short as it is, its very descriptive and can be taken for many situations. i read it several times and can apply it to different things. very good for one your age. remember your pen can be mightier than the sword.(poetry)
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