unfaithfully faithful

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    unfaithfully faithful

    ok i am changing in my own ways..read my poem and tell me what u think

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    i love you but i cheat.

    i'm awoke but i sleep

    i gave up when i tried

    i told you the truth when i lied.

    i already knew the results...but im suprised

    i can tell what type of person you are..and im blind

    always right but still get left

    i hear whats going on even though im deaf

    i can look into your eyes

    tell a bunch of lies

    waste alot of time

    make it look lk it was just u and i

    when i already know theres about 4 or 5

    other different guys that is on my time

    no low 4's and no high 5's

    yea u win but theres no prize

    i want u but i don't at the same time

    thats wh im ungratefully grateful

    and unfaithfully faithful

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    TrueLove89 commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-05-2008

    I enjoyed this poem alot. I love reading poems i find my self relating too!

    Gizina commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-04-2008

    I really like this poem, and I understand where you are coming from and where you are going to!

    mssuebee commented on unfaithfully faithful

    12-02-2008

    I think it's good. You are trying to leave a message,I think. Do you know what the message is?

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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