Unilove

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Unilove

If a heart beats a hundred times a minute     
In between those beats are something to an amazement
Can be seen through, only with engagement
of this flute and yours too
Do not hold back of the pauses
Let loose the dams
Feel thy self explode bits and too pieces
Who cannot feel this warmth. 

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am2anangel commented on Unilove

11-28-2011

I get a bit of a magical mysterious feel from this piece considering the moments between heartbeats. A joy of release of the overpowering feeling of love. I have one called hartbeat if you'd like to read it. Enjoyed this write. Hope you add more. -Tonya

TerenceRR

10/19/2012

Thanks Tonya, sorry I'm replying a year later , but this is the first time I've been on since, yea it's one of the poems I like to get lost in the most but then found

AlisRed commented on Unilove

03-27-2011

I like your wording in the poem it really carried out the emotion~Alis

TerenceRR

03/27/2011

Thanks, that was my goal, to let the poem play itself through with no boundaries

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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