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     I asked  A question,
    Im not even interested  in the answer,
    Im wondering  if this is
    what it is ,
    This  cant be the solution,
    but seeming to be ,
    more problematic,
    then  the energy
    waisted on  it
    if It aint broke dont fix it
    This aint  the recipe
    for  anyones future

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    Pocahantas commented on Solutions


    I felt that. Relationships sometimes only work with as much energy put into it, mutually. And if it's meant to be and EVERYTHING is mutual, it works. That's what I received from your poem. Nice write!

    windsongs commented on Solutions


    name this -solutions become clear in settling-i like it!




    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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