Until

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  • Love

    Until
    Love is a time bomb

    building in your chest

    no one can disarm it

    so just give it a rest



    you can pull all you want

    but my heart, it is still

    no bomb beats for me

    but i'll wait for you until..



    untill my heart stops beating

    untill you leave, my friend

    i'll wait for you until..

    this world is at it's end

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Until

    02-20-2009

    you need to add more emotion to your work. i think with a little more time you will be a great poet considering how young you are. good job.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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