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    i wasn't sure what this was about I simply started writing in this is what came out

    written october 5th 2009

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    I'm not sure what I could take from this
    How this could help me in any possiable way
    its hard to find the right words to something
    when you truely have nothing to say

    so I sit upon my chair pondering my situation
    ready to expose everything with the movement of the pen in my hand
    maybe if I just begin to write it will all come out
    like a great explosion in the dead of night and I'll finaly understand

    you see people are strange, and they do things in which they regreat
    they have to decide what's wrong and what's right
    they have to figuar their selves out and decide
    to either hide in the shadows or step into the light

    so I try to grasp the concept of the mind
    to realize what truely is real and fake
    how much I can bend
    and how much I can truely take

    time seems to slip away a life time seems so short
    you blink and you are on your death bed
    and things that you've kept to yourself
    suddenly needs to be said

    there's something in my life
    that is just dragging me down
    its a tangiable bang
    the reverbrates no sound

    I realize everything is said in silence
    and when you speak there is nothing to be known
    and as my pen dances across the paper
    this is what I'm shown

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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