Untitled on the spot

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    Untitled on the spot
    My world upside down is flipped
    myself, unequipped.
    Heart racing
    new challenges I'm facing.
    What is this I'm feeling?
    My mind reeling.
    Could it be love?

    Or is it only lust?
    Oh, I'm going to bust!
    Never felt like this before
    Nor, I'm afraid, will I evermore.
    Is this young thing
    the only one these feelings bring?
    Or will I rise above?

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    toxicindiangirl commented on Untitled on the spot

    01-30-2009

    you never know, and its good to be safe. just don't be too safe. you never know. love the poem.
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    KJULEST commented on Untitled on the spot

    01-28-2009

    I say go for it even if it is just lust, be free live,, go for it
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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