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    You told me, you love me

    There's no way you can hear me

    Coz you're a thousand miles away

    I can't find a way

     

    You leave for another soul

    Can't bear it, so foul

    You crashed my heart into pieces

    Can be whole again with your kisses

     

    Struck me with a knife

    Coz the pain is just the same

    Please take my whole life

    My pride is full of shame

     

    But, thanks for the pain

    For the experiences I've gained

    I'm smiling when I meet you

    Now, I'm dying to forget you. 

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    Phoenix9 commented on (untitled)

    07-25-2009

    very nice, a good read indeed, keep up th good writing, you have a way with words
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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