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    this poem was written for and inspired by a my friend Forrest Groves

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    This boy without a namewalks without fear and knows no shame
    he looks into the mirror and what does he see
    not the man he wants to behe has hit rock bottomso he figures there's no where else to go but upnothing left to loseso much to gainbut why does this life offer so much painlife is not worth livingfull of give and takebut at the moment seems take more than  givelife is so hard without ambitionthe want to achieveis overpowered by the fear to failso for this boy life is standing stillnothing lost nothing gained

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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