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I was with someone for ten months. It's the longest, I've ever been with a person. He was everything a gal would want. Amazing, smart, kind, friendly, funny. I'm sure he won't agree with me on this, but I know I ruined parts of his life. Yet I was able to piece them back, little by little. This isn't a poem to spite him or the new girl he's with. This is just a small mixture of emotions that I've felt and have been feeling. The last line, is something I say to myself all the time. He was the strongest with me. He was pleasure and privilege to be with. If down the line, I never see or speak to him, then I'll just remember all the times we had. He's amazing. I will always be in love you Phil Spires. Even if you're not in love with me. Thank you for being strong with me... Even if I wasn't strong enough for you.

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And if you want me, let me know.
And if you need me, don't let me go.
And if you care for me, don't stop loving me at all.
Be prepared to catch me, if I may fall.

If you can't be strong with me, then I can't be with you... 

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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