Vows

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    Vows

    I stand here today before God, our family, and our friends professing my love for you.

    As a girl everyone has their dream guy, but seldom ever find the man they dream about. I believe that I am one of the blessed ones who has found the man I always knew I would spend the rest of my life with.

    Everyone has their opinion of what a relationship should be, but no two relationships are ever really the same. I was never really sure what a real relationship should be until I met you. You have shown me what a real love should feel like, you have uplifted my spirit and love me with all of my flaws.

    Looking into your eyes, I see a man who loves and cares for me the way no else can. Thinking of our future together I feel excited and have no hesitation about building our lives together and becoming one.

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    bforibus commented on Vows

    01-25-2009

    i loved it. its everything i would want a woman to vow to me, but as a poem i wish these beautiful colors song more to me. very good write

    dave005 commented on Vows

    01-25-2009

    to me a GOOD poem should invoke an emotion from the reader, and this poem does that. Very well written

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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