waiting

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    waiting
    another day of fun filled adventure
    the way of the furture
    burn another bowl for pleasure
    i'm sure they'll be here soon
    ten minutes not more to lose
    gotta itchy trigger finger that sticks like glue
    broke the radio and the phone
    now i got no voice to lay on
    death to patience
    i got use to waiting on

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    cookie commented on waiting

    12-05-2008

    its not bad, poetically, i have to admit that i am a little confused as to the last 3 lines--what they are supposed to mean.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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