Walk within the shadows

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    Life is poetry if your willing to see it

    Walk within the shadows

     Happiness is a moment,
    in the still frame of life...
    As we walk within the shadows,
    always searching for the light...

     Winds bring the changes,
    and the day's bring the night...

    --Love is an illusion, that cloaks the lonely eye--

     There could never be forever,
    for forever would surely pass...
     Your looking for the answers,
    but it makes no sense to ask...

    --But too freeze that moment, would be worth more then wealth--

     As we walk within the shadows,
     only hiding from are self's...


                              Written by: Matthew D. Boyd

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    dumplin commented on Walk within the shadows

    09-25-2009

    U used too instead of to and are instead of our and that should be ourselves. However, nice flow, awesome poem altogether.
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    RebeccaKempf33 commented on Walk within the shadows

    09-25-2009

    Very well written. I could see and experience every emotion as I read every word. Good imagery.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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