WATER

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    WATER

    last night i found myself wet
    today im covered with sweat
    everything happened so fast
    yet i cant seem to remember my past
    the water i had chosen
    now with my mistakes im frozen
    the more of it i took in
    the more i lost withen
    for years and years i fight
    this ghoastly demon every night
    my familey and friends was what it took
    with my life failing i still was hooked
    i was at war for many years
    but finally from the water i am clear
    so dont stop fighting my friend
    life my turn out perfect in the end

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    Artie commented on WATER

    03-31-2010

    I like your way of thinking, and understand the message here. Writing like this comes from only one place, experience. 10 from me

    chichigurl89 commented on WATER

    02-23-2010

    really nice work... you are amazing!!! keep up the good work

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