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Waterless Rain

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Tragic State Of A Collect

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war and peace, loss so much loss

Waterless Rain
He steps through a sheer shimmering curtain
Aspace void of life
A stage is set for tragedy
Dark yet luminous
Emotions spent before all that is
All that was
Ill to compromise
These our ever changing times
A clock somewhere ticks
A cathedral bell chimes
Then an explosion
Doves and tears colide
All that one asks
Is why

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Gramma2 commented on Waterless Rain 10-25-2009: Your poem evoked potent imagery. I did not understand why you misspelled sheer and shimmering. Typo?; Reply to Comment