Wedding

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    Wedding

    Your voice, your smile, the way your eyes make me melt. You take my breath away with just one glance. You provided me with feelings I didn't know could be felt. Could this be true romance? The love that you show can only be described as a pre-wedding glow. The "I do's" are said, the crowd does cheer. But suddenly, I'm feeling fear. What's going on? What's happening here? Suddenly I hear. "Wake up dear. You had a dream. Hurry to school before the bell rings."

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    painz commented on Wedding

    03-09-2009

    Great twist sad it was not true though

    bandit1192 commented on Wedding

    02-23-2009

    Good job. Nice twist at the end. TS

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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