what do i eant to be

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    what do i eant to be
    someone ask me a long time ago what do i want to be
    and i rember replying that i want to be free
    it dosent matter the coler of my skin or my eyes
    because inside of me is the freedom that cryes
    wether i am white yellow black blue or green you see
    all i know is that i want to be free
    free to be me
    the freedome to be
    so give yourself the freedome of bein you
    so when anyone ask you what you want to be tell them you want to be free the freedome to be.

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    susanismith commented on what do i eant to be

    06-25-2009

    Freedom is a feeling everyone comprehends...a battle the people are still fighting about today, whether it is within themselves, the government, or the world... Very descriptive, I enjoyed it.
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    famous commented on what do i eant to be

    04-19-2009

    I love your topic. We all want to be free. Nice work. I also like your profile. I love to laugh as well and it's the best medicine tight? I give your poem an 8
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    steezville commented on what do i eant to be

    11-30-2008

    not bad...
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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