WHAT IS LIFE SUPPOSED TO BE

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    WHAT IS LIFE SUPPOSED TO BE

    What is life supposed to be without no one to care
    What is life supposed to be without any love to share
    What is life supposed to be when theres no one else whos willing
    What is life supposed to be when all youre doing is giving
    What is life supposed to be when you gave all that you can give
    I say to you just dont give up all you do is live....
                                               

                                                    
                                         WHAT IS LIFE

                                                   

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    ccslim commented on WHAT IS LIFE SUPPOSED TO BE

    11-30-2009

    I like this write! Nice touch in presentation! I felt there was something left out in a sense of direction at the end rather than the point we're to just live what is life.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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