What is Love?

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    i'm kind of hoping to get some real feedback also tell me if i misspelled something

    What is Love?

    What is love?
    But a deep sense of affection

    What is love?
    But a deep depresion

    What is love?
    but a beautiful wildflower
    that blooms in that spring
    but soons wilts in the winter

    What is love?
    but a curse set upon us mortals
    mortals foolish enough to
    be held by its evil grasp

    What is love?
    Is it mere word?
    Or is it fate written in stone
    by god himself?

    What is love?
    But humans unkown desire?

    What is love?
    But a lust stronger then most

    What is love?
    But gods greatest gift to man
    and greatest threat to mankind

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    ravenrose commented on What is Love?

    09-23-2009

    nice. its very good. you might be young but you still need to learn the ways or the heart.
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    KoriTsuki commented on What is Love?

    09-22-2009

    xD wow you got really technical about this one, how long did you think about it?
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