What my dat bringsme

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What my dat bringsme

Sunrise brings me feelings of hope and ambition.

Morning brings toil and perspiration.

Evening brings times of relaxation.

Sunset brings feelings of awe and admiration

Bed time brings a time of complete restoration to once again fulfill your ambition.

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bluewolf commented on What my dat bringsme

08-21-2009

I like the symetry of your wording, as it makes me smile. There is, at least on my part, a positive underlining empathy within the words.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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