WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

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Sometimes to remember the ones we've lost all we have to do is pause and take a moment When We Close Our Eyes.......

WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

When I Close My Eyes

Every time as I lay in the darkness
No matter how hard my mind tries
I see your face, I feel your touch
        When I Close My Eyes

I lay there with my thoughts
As the memory of you never Dies
Like it is burned in there forever
        When I Close My Eyes

I have so many things that burden me
Small or Large no matter the Size
I can always lose myself in your fantasy
        When I Close My Eyes

I remember every moment, touch and kiss That my heart to you ties
All I feel and felt comes rushing back to me
        When I Close My Eyes

Every curve and line with that smile
And sparkle that was such a prize
I can see it’s brilliance and feel it’s radiance
       When I Close My Eyes

The Love and The Warmth from your caress
My heart can always recognize
Even if I can only have it now
      When I Close My Eyes

Your memory is always there to comfort me
My tears it helps subside
I know for sure that your still with me
      When I Close My Eyes

I thank God for your memory, my broken
Spirit it can always help to Rise
I always get a little magic from it
     When I Close My Eyes

Even though right now we can’t be together
And that’s something that I despise
I don’t worry cause I know We will be
     When I Close My Eyes.

JD Wright

12/12/2009

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Teardrops commented on WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

12-12-2009

Wow ! one great love poem . Even though she is gone you still feel her in ever thing around you i have been where this poem is now and i hope i never lose the joy of seeing my love when i close my eyes .

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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