When

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    When

    Imagine going to heaven without actually being there.
    Picture yourself on the moon.
    Can you feel the sun burning your inn beans.
    Alaska isnt cold enough to put out this fire.
    My heart stop all air to the moon .
    My soul stop speaking.
    My body just stop completely.
    When you touch.
    When you kiss.
    When you love.
    When you dream.
    When you smell.
    When you taste.
    When you see.
    When you be.
    My inn beans just come to an end.
    All the control i have is gone from the sight of you.
    From the smell of your love.
    From the touch of your soul.
    From hearing your voice.
    When you touch my soul our love bring me back to birth.
    When my love

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    Phoenix9 commented on When

    10-30-2009

    like the concept, just a question what are Inn beans?? its a very good poem with feeling.

    Sairah85

    10/31/2009

    my soul.... my life... thats what i mean by my inn beans come to an end...

    Sairah85

    10/31/2009

    its like that person has a speacial power over me to control everything in my body..... and when his gone am gone...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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